六年級英語作文及點評：Tom’s Holiday

 　　Tom’s Holiday

　　Tom went to Beijing by plane on his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the Nature Park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictures. They will come back home tomorrow. In a word, they enjoy their holiday.

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　　寫法：這篇習作是按照地點的順序記敘假期里的活動，記敘了假期里去北京做了哪些活動以及對活動的感受。

　　時態(tài)：這篇文章可采用兩種時態(tài)來寫。由于本單元主要講述的是一般過去時的用法，所以這里大部分我們采用一般過去時比較合適。

　　句型：主語+動詞過去式+其他?? 主語+will+動詞原形+其他

　　注意：活動的相關表達法可采用舊知識和新知識相結合去寫，但要注意動詞過去式的變化規(guī)則。例：eat 的過去式為ate，為不規(guī)則變化。