五年級英語作文及點評：My Village

 　　My Village

　　My village is very beautiful. There are many houses in the village. Near the village, there is a forest. A small river is in front of the village. The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you can see a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village. Welcome to my village!

　　【要領點評】

　　本文以“我的村莊”為題描述了自己家鄉(xiāng)的風景。介紹了村莊的房屋、森林、河流及大山，使人看了這篇作文后確實感覺到“我的村莊”的美麗。小朋友們在寫作時，可仔細想一下自己的村莊或所在城市的特點，盡量使用本單元學過的單詞或短語進行敘述。